Fourteen: A New Discovery From China

March 12th, 2018, 8:30 am
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Caroline Parkinson
January 11th, 2018, 2:53 pm
The final panel was redrawn so many times. i still hate it.
May 21st, 2019, 2:36 am
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Spirit of Water
March 12th, 2018, 4:14 pm
I empathize. Having to redo sections can be really frustrating, especially when it's still not what you wanted.

It did turn out well artistically, though. (Seeing the figure of the old man in his eyes is a good effect, too.) But if you're looking for a comment on the potential nagging feeling, it might be that a pause could have gone there. They just got surprised, and he's just been accused. Is he as fast with his tongue as he is on his feet?

Regardless, great work so far. :)
Caroline Parkinson
March 14th, 2018, 11:57 am
Thanks for the compliment and the suggestions! Is he as fast with his tongue? That would be a "no" :)